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Watching The Stars

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is a very good drawing on my behalf, but there are a few, if many, flaws in this drawing.

First of all, the stars. They can range from shades of yellow, white, blue, and red, depending on the temperature.
They are also scattered far apart or stand close together at once, like in this picture: www.tedwolfe.com/Gallery/Image…, and range in different sizes too.

The moon has dark grey or light grey spots/patches as well, but it's best if you add them as light grey from this distance.

The grass should have little strands here and there, depending on how high or low you want them to be. And the shading is ok, but I think there should be more shades, as in like a range of color shading.

The cat anatomy is good, it just depends on the style.

The blanket is ok as well, however, I think there should be more shading with the wrinkles and what not. And make sure the squares on the blanket go with the curves.

Well, that's all for now.
I hope you use some of my advice to help you in the future.
Have a good day!